as your teeth split
like sea clams.
Opening and closing.
Your dove-gray jaw
heaves in high staccato,
charting gentle flagships
and postmarking
a sea of white-washed
heel and shin conversations.
Tiny splinters of light
beneath the tide pools
reveal delicate shells,
making real
the faraway sounds
of a name.
Photo Credit: Maragret Durow
This is great,
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well done.
Thanks for linking up with potluck.
The nameless poem is very esoteric, and hard for me to wrap my head around, which, on its own, makes it very intriguing. I absolutely ADORE "Tea," though. Marvelous rhyme-scheme!
ReplyDeleteFantastic imagery sets the tone, intriguing piece.
ReplyDeletea very inspired writing..
ReplyDeleteGreat images and a great rhythm to this poem.
ReplyDeleteI love how you write. You are a poet.
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Jeff loves this one, and said so.
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery... you have written a powerful verse.. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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wonderful poem. i like your choice of words. they are textural. great job!
ReplyDeleteYou words gain more power each time I read them. They breath a life into my grey-troubled mind.
ReplyDeleteI like your way with words and how they flow in your work. Well-written! I second what was written in one of the comments above; you are a poet!
ReplyDeleteI love your style, so YOU.
ReplyDeleteHave a Blessed Thanksgiving Madison...bkm
ReplyDeleteSuch beauty.
ReplyDeleteI love this.
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your imagery is wrapped in mystery but shines in beauty. The touch of surrealism makes it a bit of a puzzle for the brain, yet we can feel the meaning from our senses.
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